Halloween Stories part 1

My first years' assignment is to write a scary story. I give them the first half--they and some friends are out late trick-or-treating and take a short cut through the woods, but need to take shelter from the rain in an abandoned house--and they finish it.

Here are the best of the scary stories.

I heard a noise. But my friends didn't hear a noise. I heard a noise again at midnight. I looked back. A young girl was standing behind me. She said, "trick or treat, please give me some chocolates!" I was very surprised. I went out of the old house alone. The forest was dark. I didn't hear some noise. A long time, I was walking. I could get to my home. I was very happy.
I don't know who the young girl is. I want to forget this happening. But I remember her voice and her words every year. ( by K)

When we finished a cholocate bar, we heard footsteps. I wanted to escape out of the house, but we couldn't reach the door. The footsteps came near us, so we hid under the bed. Then, a man came into the room. He looked around the room and stared at the bed. When he lifted up the bed, I thought we would die. But he ran away out of the house! We thought why he ran away. My friend had a cross. The man is a vampire. After that, it stopped raining and the sun rose. We got home and told our parents. But everyone said there was no house on the hill. What was the house? (by Y)

I saw a light. My friend said, "someone is here! we can ask him how to get to our town!" My friends looked very happy. But my heart began to beat faster. The thing we thought was a person was a Jack'o'Lantern! It was moving alone and it said to us, "why are you here? you mustn't be here!" He looked very angry. We were too afraid to run and we hid under the bed. Then, we heard someone's voice. It said, "don't be here, don't be here..." The voice became louder and louder. We ran and hid again. For a while, we went out of the house. Then, the thunder fell on the house. The house broke. We looked around and one of my friends found her way home. Her house was near the old house. I found a light from the broken house. I said to it, "thank you very much." The light looked happy. (by C)